We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Sofia you have included several adjectives in this recount. You have placed lots of capitals correctly and included an exclamation mark for more interest. Well done.
To conclude your writing with an ending.
To place fullstops correctly.